Correct+My+Grammar

=//This is our new "Correct My Grammar" wiki!//=

====Here are your directions. Please skip down a line (go the end of the last line written and add two carriage returns) and re-write the previous sentence(s), but correct any grammatical mistakes that are in it (them). Place your first and last initials at the end of the line. (If you happen to find some more inaccuracies in sentences that are supposedly "fixed," feel free to fix those too [and place your initials at the end of that line].) Then, when you have fixed the previous sentence, skip down a line (add two carriage returns) and add your own incorrect sentence(s) for the next user to "fix" (and place your initials at the end of the line). To be clear, nobody should change anybody else's sentence(s), but should re-write them complete with correction(s). I'd like for every teacher to correct at least one, and to offer at least one incorrect one. Let me get things started:====

There are 10 kinds of people in the world. People who understand the binary numeral system, and people who don't. :-) TS

There are 2 kinds of people in the world. People who understand the binary numeral system and people who don't. RC

There are two kinds of people in the world: people who understand the binary numeral system and people who don't. LLS

Did you ever feel that the world was a tuxedo, and you were a brown pair of shoes? RC/KS

Him and his bestest friend found a time capsule burried in a empty lot. KS

He and his best friend found a time capsule buried in an empty lot. ST

When henry ran for public office he had no idea it would be the most difficultest thing he had ever done. ST

When Henry ran for public office, he had no idea it would be the most difficult thing he had ever done. CW

Sam missed the bus to school but he catched a ride with his neighbor. CW

Sam missed the bus to school, but he caught a ride with his neighbor. WC

Mrs carter the 5th grade reading teacher bullyed me in the caferteria. WC

Mrs. Carter the 5th grade reading teacher bullied me in the cafeteria. AT

This has bin a long da. I need to go to bed AT

This has been a long day. I need to go to bed. LG

I looking farward to thanksgiving brake. LG

I am looking forward to Thanksgiving Break. AB

Mr. Crews the special education teacher is a great resoorce to obtain information about insurance. AB

Mr. Crews, the Special Education teacher, is a great resource to obtain information about insurance. DC

the fifth, grade team saw Mr. crews floating by Mrs' Carters' window during the rainstorm. DC

The fifth grade team saw Mr. Crews floating by Mrs. Carter's window during the rainstorm. CC

help, help, he shouted as he floated downstream CC

Help! Help! He shouted as he floated downstream. MP

mrs. mary lyons is a wondrerful liberian resoore person MP

Mrs. Mary Lyons is a wonderful librarian resource person. LLS

Me and her went to the store together two wednesday's ago. LLS

She and I went to the store together two Wednesdays ago. DR

me and my famly are going to the mountians for thanksgiving. DR

My family and I are going to the mountains for Thanksgiving. BC

me are looking forward to spending time with my family during the holidays BC

I am looking forward to spending time with my family during the holidays. CC

BCMS playes martha puckett tomorow CC

BCMS plays Martha Puckett tomorrow. RH

Me and my family is going to the parade on saturday RH

My family and I are going to the parade on Saturday. DD

i aint got's know pencil's DD

I do not have a pencil. YG

The student's have went to wild adventures twise this year YG

The students have gone to Wild Adventures twice this year. LA

The students' have wrote many stories about there trip. LA

The students have written many stories about their trip. TS

DONE!!! Now on to the next step -- the REAL reason we've learned to use this!

(BTW, and back to my original post -- 10 is the binary numeral system equivalent of 2 -- get it?)